Thursday, October 6, 2011

He said. He did. He…He…He


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I never thought I would have to say this—writers, don’t start every sentence of your novel with He…

I’ve come across enough self-published books to know that some are worth-while.  I can recommend Riding Through It by Carol McKibben.  I can recommend Eragon by Christopher Paolini.  (It started out as a self-published book that turned traditionally published)  Other than that, I can’t recommend anything.  Why?  Because there are books out there that start every sentence with “He…”. 
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